Monday, February 09, 2009

I hate you!!

"I hate you", said me
For extremities is what I love
And my hate is like none other
As though it was this moment of serendipity
When my blinded eyes could see none but you
Under the abode of my temple
Lay my soul in that cradle of thy sleeve.

7 comments:

BlackThorn said...

i hate you, said you
i hate to hate, said me
i hate to love, said the ones who love
i love to hate, said the ones who hate

For extremities is what i love
For extremities is what i bask in
for extremities is what has spoiled me
for extremities is what has ruined me
for extermiteis is what makes me feel alive
for exremities is what drives me to be born
to die, to be re-born, and to die again
for exremities is what defines me
for extremities is waht refines me
for extremeits of births and deaths is wat gives birth to a span called life
for without births and deaths there wudnt have been lives to be lived
for without deaths we would be caught up in the maze of scornful hates and supeficial loves
for its when we embrace death, we embrace our souls
and when we embrace our soul is when we embrace our true love!

btw, much credit has to be given to the beats of this one, which i was listening to when i wrote the above lines:

Ooo Ooo, Ooo Ooo
Theek Hai Theek Theek Sab Kuch Theek Hai
Paas Hai Sab Kuch Rab Nazdeek Hai, Ooo Ooo
Hey Rab Ke Hazur Mein Kasmein Bhi Kha Li
Duniya Ki Auni Pauni Rashmein Nibha Li, Ooo Ooo
Phir Bhi Na Koi To Dafa Kar
Mane Jo Mane Na Mane Jo Bhala Kar
Duniya Na Mane Kashmanu Khaye
Kashmanu Khaye Marjaani
Haayee (Marjaani Marjaani)
Marjaani Marjaani
Marjaani Marjaani
Marjaani Marjaani
Oye Kashmanu Khaye Marjaani
Marjaani Marjaani
Marjaani Marjaani
Marjaani Marjaani
Oye Kashmanu Khaye Marjaani
Oye Kashmanu Khaye Marjaani
Oye Kashmanu Khaye Marjaani
Ooo Ooo Ooo Ooo

Haan Chalo Ab Dur Yahan Se
Paahado Se Bhi Aage Woh
Jahan Per Subha Jaage..
Ho Bade Sab Kehte Hain Yeh
Chuno Acche Hum Saaaye
Samjh Ke Jo Samjhaye
Ro Ro Ke Raathon Mein
Aankhein Bhi Khali Ki
Likh Likh Ke Tarikhe Diwar Kaali Ki
Chup Kar Chup Chup Kar Baliye
Bhage Le Chup Chup Kar Chhup Kar Baliye
Duniya Se Bhage Duniya Mein
Duniya Ko Hui Hairaani

rashi_pratibimb said...

Aha!! very well written...
impeccably incorrigible :)

As for the song...Gulzar at his best yet again...
Few lines that I like...

Jo sar mein soch aayegi, tou pau mein moch aayegi

Ro Ro Ke Raathon Mein
Aankhein Bhi Khali Ki
Likh Likh Ke Tarikhe Diwar Kaali Ki

Btw, I never heard the lyrics before you posted it here...it was always the heavy beats which camouflaged the lyrics....Thanks!!

Madhurjya (Banjo) Banerjee said...

Why have you stopped?

rashi_pratibimb said...

@Banjo : words caught ill :)

algo said...

what a good way to say the same lady "you know , i hate you the day i saw..
the way u smile, the way u talk..
and i want to hate you each coming moment of life from my bottom of my heart. coz that s the way i can keep you alive and imbibe your spirits"


good work keep it up

algo said...

वादा नही है मेरा तुझसे ..........ता -उम्र तेरा साथ निभाऊंगा ........
पर जब भी तू मुझे याद करेगी ......तेरे आखो से नमी बन के छलक जाऊंगा
सर्द रातो में बेचैन होगी जो तू कभी ..बन आसमा एक चादर तेरे सिने से लिपट जाऊंगा
भीड़ में खोये रहोगे गर कभी तुम ...बन के एक काफिर तेरी हर मंजिल बन जाऊंगा
थक जाएँगी ये जुबा तेरी ख़ुद को समजाते हुए ..बन प्यार का एक एहसास तेरे दिल में जगा जाऊंगा
फ़िर भी वादा नही है मेरा तुझसे ..........ता -उम्र तेरा साथ निभाऊंगा ........

algo said...

if i say first breeze of air and first rays of sun,
first showers of rains ,every single day of me
reminds of you like a glimpse far from past
penetrating my minds layer by layers
carving the canvas full of snaps of yours
scrubbing all the things but inflicted by you
scribe your name on each and every where
with your smile innocent one but with viscid blush ,
the more i try the more i find hard to belie
what we both meant to be destined
i could see the love all around me
full of touch and feelings so more
i feel now without you i am no more