Friday, December 19, 2008

Randomized...

Sun's shining
Shining eyes
Eyes glittering
Glittering smile
Smiling lips
Lips woven
Woven talks
Talks silent
Silent thoughts
Thoughts wandering
Wandering mind
Mind game
Game of life
Life struck
Struck hard
Hard luck
Luck lost
Lost heart
Heart shattered
Shattered pieces
Pieces of glass
Glass and blood
Blood dripping
Dripping with pain
Pain...incomplete!

5 comments:

rachita said...

hey
interesting connections
and nice blog
:)

rashi_pratibimb said...

@Rachita

Thanks Rachita!!
And thnx for the visit too...do keep dropping by:)

g'Krish said...

Interesting, intricate, complex yet clearly inter-twined connections!

My tweak!

Sun's shining
Shining eyes
Eyes glittering
Glittering smile
Smiling lips
Lips woven
Woven talks
Talks silent
Silent thoughts
Thoughts wandering
Wandering mind
Mind game
Game of life
Life struck
Struck hard
Hard luck
Luck lost
Lost heart
Heart beats
Beats Faith
Faith Strong
Strong words
Words limited
Limited by Distance
Distance Long
Long chats
Chats pain
Pain...sweet!

Keshi said...

beautifully written!

Keshi.

rashi_pratibimb said...

@Keshi

Thanks Keshi!